Live Query Critique with Natalie Fischer
**Update**
Natalie has been kind enough to donate a query critique to one lucky winner. To enter, leave a comment on this post by 11:59 pm eastern on April 14th. We’ll draw one winner and announce their name on Friday, April 15th.*
*If your query was part of the event, we won’t restrict you from entering. You might, however, want to consider letting someone win who hasn’t had a chance to get feedback from Natalie. Up to you. We won’t judge either way.



The Live Query Event was beyond awesome. So much insight and great information! My thanks go out to both WriteOnCon and Natalie Fischer!
This event was beyond amazing!! Learned so much! Thank you Writeoncon & Natalie <3
Good stuff!
Thanks for your comment on my query. I’d still love to know if the premise would grab you if I wasn’t an Aussie.
Count me in, a critique from you would make my whole year!
My critique was one of the deleted few due to technical problems. I was unable to repost at 12:00 the following day due to a prior engagement. I would love to have my query critiqued. It is posted on the writing boards under YA Query Critiques.
Thank you so much. This was very informative!
I didn’t get to attend while the chat was happening, but reading the transcript was just as informative and wonderful as ever. Thanks a lot!
Fantastic event, as always. Thanks to the WriteOnCon ladies and Natalie! And thanks to Natalie for giving away a query critique as a prize. *fingers crossed*
I missed the live chat, but I’m off to catch up now. I know there will be some awesome info in there
My query was in the thread, but I was 3 away from getting Natalie’s feedback. I sure would love to win a critique! Fingers crossed, thanks!!
I wasn’t able to attend the live event but am looking forward to reading through the transcript.
Thanks so much for hosting the event, WOC ladies, and thanks to Natalie for her time!
Got my fingers crossed to win! I wasn’t able to be part of the event, but the information asked by others was beyond helpful! Thanks so much!
Terrific event. Thanks!
Oh I missed the event and could definitely use this!
Yeah, I just wanted to say thank you for the wonderful event, Natalie and WOC wonder ladies! You can count me out of the give away.
This was a fantastic event. I am trying to access the transcript so I can link to a blog post and can’t. Maybe it’s not up for some reason yet?
Awesome! I’ve ogt my wine, it’s 9pm, I’ve just got back to work and I’ve settled in to replay the live chat! Thanks SO much for giving back, all of you. You rock
Count me in on the query contest!
Forget the last comment, I just got the transcript up. Yay! I just want to say thanks again for a great event.
These live events are fantastic! Keep ‘em coming!
Missed the live show, but enjoyed the transcripts. A big thank you to everyone involved. I learn so much from these.
This has been a very cool talk. I like how you can go back afterwards and still find the recording. Thanks
Oh and thanks for the query contest
I couldn’t be there for the life-action but I enjoyed the transcript. The feedback was awesome. Back to the drawing board for me to improve my query. Thanks Natalie.
Great live event! Thanks Natalie
What a great event and opportunity!
I’m so bummed to keep missing these due to conflicting schedules, but I always come back and read through and it’ s been so great getting agents initial responses. But wow! It also makes it seem ever tougher to get requests. Thanks for doing these, ladies!!!
Thank goodness for transcripts because I wasn’t able to go. Really enjoyed reading the show.