Please welcome literary agent Mary Kole who is joining us to discuss avoiding character stereotypes. Mary joined Andrea Brown Literary Agency in August 2009.

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  1. Courtney Lowe on Thursday 12, 2010

    Thanks Mary!! This was an awesome post!

  2. Joseph Miller on Thursday 12, 2010

    Mind = Blown!

    Thanks Mary for the great advice and the Rubik’s cube fun ;)

  3. Carolyn on Thursday 12, 2010

    Consider my mind BLOWN.

  4. Abby Stevens on Thursday 12, 2010

    The Rubik’s Cube was a great tool to illustrate your point!

  5. KDuBayGillis on Thursday 12, 2010

    Mary, I take it back. . . after seeing that mind-blowing manuever, well, maybe you are a NERD. LOL. That surprised me about your character! Awesome vlog. Thanks for all the incredible character-building/layering exercises!

  6. Catherine Johnson on Thursday 12, 2010

    Impressive Rubik’s cube skills and lots to take away. Thanks

  7. B.J. Anderson on Thursday 12, 2010

    Holy Rubik’s cube, Batman! That was awesome.

  8. Brittany on Thursday 12, 2010

    This was wonderful, Mary. A very informative vlog. :) One of my favorites!

  9. @jmartinlibrary on Thursday 12, 2010

    Holy Mother of McCartney, Mary! I knew you were a multidimensional (not so) evil genius, but your Rubik’s cube skills are insane.

    And as a member of the MK mafia, I know this topic really is your area of expertise. Great, worthwhile insights.

    Guess I better take your advice and go write something now…

  10. caroline on Thursday 12, 2010

    So informative and entertaining! Thank you, Mary!

  11. Michelle McLean on Thursday 12, 2010

    Aawesome vlog, very nice information :) And I have to say, as soon as you hit me with that Rubik’s cube craziness, you became my new personal hero LOL I still remember ripping the colored squares apart and gluing them back together. MIND BLOWN :D

  12. Michelle McLean on Thursday 12, 2010

    see…mind so blown I spelled awesome with 2 “a’s” LOL

  13. Ammie on Thursday 12, 2010

    OH. MY. GOD. She’s SOOOO FUNNY! The cliche part about agents? I busted a gut. This was awesome.

  14. Sheri Dillard on Thursday 12, 2010

    Wonderful post! Thanks so much!

  15. Lydia Sharp on Thursday 12, 2010

    You DID blow my mind away. Not just with the Rubik’s cube, though. Awesome vlog. Both informative and fun. :D

  16. Jackee on Thursday 12, 2010

    Rubix cubes! Kicking babies! This is good stuff. Thanks for sharing, Mary! :o )

  17. Joan Stradling on Thursday 12, 2010

    Great way to illustrate your point (and blow our minds)! I’m lucky if I can get one color complete on the cube. *sigh*

    Thanks for the pointers on avoiding stereotypical characterization. :)

  18. Donna on Thursday 12, 2010

    NICE! Good info and a great use of a prop.

    (loved the part where you didn’t even look at it)

  19. Cynde L. Hammond on Thursday 12, 2010

    That was great! I loved the cube trick, too. ;)

  20. Jocelyn Rish on Thursday 12, 2010

    I really loved the demo with the Rubik’s cube to show how to create interesting characters. Visual aids = always helpful. And then . . . Mary goes and boggles my mind at the end! As someone who only ever solved the Rubik’s cube by peeling off the stickers and putting them in the right place, I am wowed.

  21. Elizabeth May on Thursday 12, 2010

    Great vlog, Mary! Very insightful, and I think a lot of people will be helped by this!

  22. Vivian on Thursday 12, 2010

    Wow. Thanks for an informative session! And to solve the Rubik’s Cube, without even looking? Whoa.

  23. Emery Lord on Thursday 12, 2010

    When I grow up, I want to be Mary Kole.

  24. Julie Musil on Thursday 12, 2010

    OH MY GOD! First, mind-blowing information. Awesome. And I can’t believe you can do the cube. I’m in awe, seriously. Thank you.

  25. Margo Kelly on Thursday 12, 2010

    Emery – when I grow up I want to be Mary’s client. :)

  26. Sherry W. on Thursday 12, 2010

    Mary,
    Great advice that I will keep in mind as I create my characters! I liked the use of the Rubiks cube to show the creation of a more complex character. My question is. . .How did you complete the puzzle so fast? It would have taken me forever. Amazing!

  27. Cheryl on Thursday 12, 2010

    Amazing presentation!

    I love how you went beyond the standard (dare I say, stereotypical?) questions to ask your characters, and I stand (okay, sit) in awe of your serious Rubics skillz.

    On a related note, apparently the Royal Shakespeare Company gets their actors to ask some pretty intense questions as an exercise for learning about the actor’s character:

    Describe your character’s relationship with his/her father and mother
    Describe the last time s/he exacted revenge
    Describe a great rupture in your character’s life
    How does s/he react when a friend wins praise
    Describe an act of bullying (either as victim or perpetrator)
    To what lengths would s/he go to secure time with a loved one?
    What childhood want still lingers in your character?
    What are your character’s deepest sexual desires?

    These are written for adult characters, but could easily apply to YA or MG characters as well. Like Mary’s questions, these delve into the heart of your character and once you know the answers, you’ll know your characters on an intimate level.

  28. Lisa Gibson on Thursday 12, 2010

    You rock Mary! That was great. Thanks for taking the time to put that together.

  29. Paul Greci on Thursday 12, 2010

    Thanks, Mary! Great tools for delving deeper into character.
    You can really dance with that Rubik’s cube!!!

  30. Elizabeth Prats on Thursday 12, 2010

    Great job, Mary :)

    REally helpful..actually about to use your questions for a brand new character right now!

  31. Patricia J. O'Brien on Thursday 12, 2010

    I love that you think of characters as friends and have expectations of them. That should be every writer’s goal, to create characters that don’t blow over in the wind.
    As for that cube–awestruck here.

  32. Sherrie Petersen on Thursday 12, 2010

    What an awesome vlog! I was actually taking notes :) Thank you!

  33. Heather Spiva on Thursday 12, 2010

    Thank you for one of the most insightful explanations of characterization and the errors in stereotyping them. I truly loved it. And will utilize it. Thanks Mary.

  34. Jamie Burch on Thursday 12, 2010

    Thank you, Mary! This is an amazing post!!!

  35. Natalie Aguirre on Thursday 12, 2010

    Thanks for all the helpful information on developing interesting characters. And sharing your own secret-that you’re a whiz at the rubric cube. That was pretty amazing.

    I follow your blog though don’t comment much. I really enjoy it.

  36. Jennifer Chen on Thursday 12, 2010

    Mary, thanks for this great info and for your awesome Rubix cube skills. I learned a lot. And you made your video fun, which is really way more entertaining than listening to someone talk.

    You rock.

  37. Anna on Thursday 12, 2010

    Awesome Mary! Thanks for the time… and for the Rubik demo.
    So useful information and great way of presenting it.

  38. Steph Sinkhorn on Thursday 12, 2010

    Ahahahahahaha! That was fantastic. Thanks Mary!

  39. Ann Marie Wraight on Thursday 12, 2010

    Congratulations on your clear diction and pronunciation! I’m sure that those friends following this brilliant conference from abroad will REALLY appreciate that.

    Your visual prop and analogies were stunningly simple but- WOW – how effective! I’m sure that none of us will ever be able to look a Rubik’s cube in the face again without hearing your presentation playing in the background…SUPER!

    THANK YOU so much for this.
    Just one more thing.
    I challenge you to:
    “reveal new shades of yourself” and do another vlog wearing a blindfold…or two eye patches will do just as well…and solve that cube without looking at all…

  40. Erinn on Thursday 12, 2010

    Did you know you’re a rock star, Mary? Because you are. That was awesome. Well done!!!

  41. Megan on Thursday 12, 2010

    Holy crap! The only way I’ve ever solved a Rubik’s cube is by peeling off and re-sticking the stickers. Great vlog, too, by the way :)

  42. Sonia Gensler on Thursday 12, 2010

    Mary, you’re a genius!

  43. Sara McClung on Thursday 12, 2010

    That was definitely one of my favorites of the conference! What a different way to think about characters =) Thanks!!

  44. Jan on Thursday 12, 2010

    The next time I hear about a character having many facets, I’ll think of you and your Rubik’s cube! :o

    Thanks for such a multi-faceted presentation! You rock!

  45. Kat on Thursday 12, 2010

    I really enjoyed this :) Thanks for taking the time to vlog!

  46. kellye on Thursday 12, 2010

    Thanks, Mary! Great info! And you DID blow my mind with the rubik’s cube! I can NEVER get those things…

  47. Ishta Mercurio on Thursday 12, 2010

    LOL about the stereotypes about Agents!

    And this was the Best. Vlog. EVER. WOW! I feel like I just got a whole character workshop for FREE!

    This is why I have been following your blog for so long. You’re a genius.

    THANK YOU!

  48. Leslie on Thursday 12, 2010

    I think my mind was blown

  49. Loretta Nyhan on Thursday 12, 2010

    This was AWESOME! Thanks, Mary!

  50. A. B. Williams on Thursday 12, 2010

    Whoa. Great advice! I especially like the question about “what’s in the box at the bottom of the closet?” That image rocked my imagination, sparked new ideas for exploring my characters’ secrets. And I am glad to know about your blog. Thanks for your sharing your insights!