Please welcome literary agent Mary Kole who is joining us to discuss avoiding character stereotypes. Mary joined Andrea Brown Literary Agency in August 2009.

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  1. Carol on Thursday 12, 2010

    Mary, building characters is always fun. You’ve given me more ideas to develop to give them more depth. Thanks.

  2. Robin Reul on Thursday 12, 2010

    Wow. Just wow. Not only was that an amazing vlog, but I am in awe of your most excellent Rubik’s skills.

  3. DHE on Thursday 12, 2010

    Mind=blown. This was PERFECT, Mary, thank you!! Such good advice!! Now, when I’m thinking character, I will always picture the rubiks cube!

  4. Kelly Polark on Thursday 12, 2010

    Great vlog! I love the list of unique characteristics! And your mad skillz on the cube ain’t so bad either.

  5. saputnam on Thursday 12, 2010

    Thank you for taking time out of your busy day to help make WriteOnCon an incredible experience for everyone.

    Great advice!! I am in awe of your Rubix Cube skills.

  6. lizstraw on Thursday 12, 2010

    Love the way you used the Rubix Cube to demonstrate the facets of a character. (can you put it back together now?) Lots of good things to think about! Thanks.

  7. KrisT on Thursday 12, 2010

    Thanks Mary. I feel re-inspired!

  8. Nancy on Thursday 12, 2010

    specific! concrete! dextrous!
    thanks for the great vlog. i’m putting your advice to work immediately.

  9. debi on Thursday 12, 2010

    That was great! and I’m getting a rubix cube. What a great way to see where you really are with the stereo type. Thanks!

  10. Traci VW on Thursday 12, 2010

    Thanks Mary. Very informative and fun! I’m off to do some more thinking and soul searching to make sure my characters are real.

  11. Rebecca Christiansen on Thursday 12, 2010

    The Rubik’s cube was a *fantastic* analogy!

  12. Charlie Eve on Thursday 12, 2010

    That was amazing, so much great information! Thanks Mary!

  13. Erica Chapman on Thursday 12, 2010

    Fabulous! Love the ending… Such great information. Thank you :)

  14. ToniLeland on Thursday 12, 2010

    Thanks for all the great advice. :)

  15. Heather Kephart on Thursday 12, 2010

    Most excellent! I love your Rubik’s Cube analogy, it definitely burned a colorful hole in mee brain. But whaaat happened at the end there? LOL!

  16. Renee Abbas on Thursday 12, 2010

    Amazing. That was an incredible demonstration.
    I want a quilt square avatar, too.
    Thanks Mary!

  17. Corinne on Thursday 12, 2010

    What an awesome way to bring this point home… I have moved my Rubik’s Cube to my desk and will be thinking about your analogy.

    Using the cube to make your point: idelible

    Solving the Rubik’s cube while barely looking at said cube: *absolutely fabulous*

    Thank you Mary!
    Corinne

  18. Carolin on Thursday 12, 2010

    The lists were very helpful. I’m off to think a bit about my answer to these questions for my characters. Thank you. :D

  19. Portalwriter on Thursday 12, 2010

    I have a bully character that I’m trying to develop against stereotype. So when you talked about “villians” that was very helpful.

    And as for your Rubik skills. Yeah, you did blow my mind.

  20. Tessa Quin on Thursday 12, 2010

    Thanks so much for that, Mary. I’m diving into revisions and rewrites as soon as I’ve re-read/re-watched everything from this conference. These are great advices that I can use to sharpen my characters.

  21. Carmen Ferreiro on Thursday 12, 2010

    Wow!

    Your rubik cube skills are amazing!

    i hope I can construct my characters as skillfully.

    Thank you so much for your insight.

  22. Julie Hedlund on Thursday 12, 2010

    As somebody who has NEVER been able to do Rubik’s Cube with any degree of success, my mind is officially blown. Not to mention all the great info on character…

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